Let me tell you the story of yesterday’s burglary. The mystery of the missing silver was discovered by the butler who alerted security. The guards disturbed the burglar as he circled the perimeter fence looking for an escape route.He had entered the house without disturbing a soul. He slithered with uncertainty from room to room until he discovered the Fern family silver.
‘Ah, perfect. I’ve come to the end of my search’, he muttered as he stuffed the silver into his sack.
The burglar made a hasty exit. As he reached the perimeter fence, he felt a hand on his collar. ‘You have been caught on camera. You must return the silver.’ said the guard sternly.
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One night early in the morning, a burglar came into our house it was very frightening he wore a silver suit of armour
he took a million dollars out of my safe andhe took my perfectly new camera with him when the police came he tried to
get away on his surf board that he stole from my next door neighbours house but he was running that fast from the harbour
he triped on the kerb and the next day the court man decided to serve him with a ten year sentence and i got all my stuff
back the end!!!!!!!!!!!
HI AND THIS IS MY SCAFFOLD TEXT CALLED
THE MILLIMETRE BURGLAR
THE MILLIMETRE BURGLAR WAS A VERY SMALL MAN BUT HE WAS ALSO VERY FIRM ,WHEN ANYONE STOOD ON HIM HE BOUNCED THEM OFF THE KERB AND TOOK OUT HIS CAMERA AND TOOK A PICTURE OF EVERY STRANGER HE DID IT TO .HE PUT IT ON COD MODERN WARFARE AND MAKES IT A TARGET.HE'S BEEN ON X FACTOR BUT HE HAD A CURSE ON HIM SO HE GOT KICKED OUT WITH HIS PARTNER GIRAFFE AND EVERY THING WAS A BLUR AND ONLY GOT A DOLLAR!! IN THE EARLY MORNING HE GOT UP AND GOT HIS PERFECT 123 LITRE BOTTLE OF SURF HARBOUR WATER AND DRANK SOME AND THEN A 10000 METRE GIANT CAME AND CRUSHED HIM TO BITS!
THE END
Good job James. Can anyone spot what James forgot to use?
Hollys Scaffold Text! :)
Once there was an evil doctor who had a giraffe. One day the evil doctor had two patients, then they were called into the evil doctors lab and there was a struck of lightening and the lights went off and there was a blur in the sky and the evil doctor put a curse on them and they were never seen again. After they woke up from the knock out, they couldn't remember anything and from then they worked for the evil doctor. Then all of a sudden a burglar broke in. He thought he would get away but the evil doctors camera spotted him and he was cursed and the evil doctor stole all of the burglars dollars. About 1 hour later the burglars partner got worried so she decided to go to the evil doctors lab. She was disguised when she walked into the evil doctors lab and set the rest of the people free and released her partner. The End. :)
JAMES DID NOT USE PUNCTUATION
The Million Dollar Stranger
Early one morning a stranger and his partner decided to enter my house. Thankfully my friend is an actor so she had a camera focused on the room.It was perfect because the stranger and partner decided to surf the net and what a serve that was; because it was captured on film.Before long Bobby beat entered the house it was all a blur because the burglar was about to furnish his house with my modern kit.They got a firm grasp round their necks and a stern talking to, on their way to the police station. These guys weren't getting my million dollar possessions thats for sure!.Megan Thornbury
James forgot full stops
Once there was a burglar called Blur. He had a giraffe that lived in a refrigerator. One day he started to measure his giraffe. When he had finished measuring his giraffe he found out that his giraffe was 5 metres tall. Early the next day when Blur went to steal a coat of armour he bumped into a stranger and the stranger was suspiciously holding a firm grip of a dollar. Blur asked him why he was holding a dollar but he just ran away!
Gone surfing
Once there was a man called Jack Armour who was brilliant at surfing. He could surf one hundred metres in one minute and also won ONE MILLION dollars. But one day he lost his surf board so he got a partner to help him find it. The surf board was very modern and had a picture of a giraffe on it. They looked around the harbour but it was all a bit of a blur as to where the surf board was. Jack decided a burglar must have stolen it.
He went home and put up some security cameras. Early the next day he went to the police to report the missing board and there it was in the lost property.
There once was a stranger who turned out to be a burglar so you had to be careful and watch out! He burgled a house and stole a set of shiny armour, some furniture, a refrigerator,a surf board and a few dollars. He took them to furnish his own house. He was only a few metres away when he tripped on the kerb and was caught by the owner who looked like a giraffe with a very long neck.
'You're in big trouble' he said. 'I have caught you on camera , you're sunk. I'm calling the police.'
The burglar ended up in jail and was never seen or heard from again.
Laurens scaffold text....
One day a long, long time ago, in a very modern house, there lived a young lady who was so perfect, she had a partner who was an actor.
One very bright morning, in the early hours, a stranger came to the house. The stranger turned out to be a burglar.
After the burglar had left, the lady discovered there was a dollar stolen from her purse and a litre of milk stolen from the refrigerator.
The lady called the Police, they came out to the house to measure the finger and footprints and to view the security camera.
The burglar was later found in the harbour, trying to board a ship to make an escape.
Jake Doodle said...
Once upon a time there was a boy called Blur.A magic man had put a curse on Blur. Blur had a pet giraffe called Refrigerator. His pet drunk millimetres and millilitres of magners beer so he got drunk and died. So that was the end of his refrigerator.
22 September 2010 16:48
christina said...
One night the perfect burglar crept into the harbour. He found a suit of armour so he put it on. He looked stranger than ever. He found a camera and a litre of ice cream in the refrigerator. He ran to the kerb, got a surf board and got out of there. An actor dressed as a giraffe tried to follow him. When the actor caught the burglar the actor asked him does he want to be on X-Factor. The burglar answered yes. THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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