Wednesday 17 November 2010

Drew’s Unusual Uniform

This week's scaffold text using the 'ue' sound.
Drew was in Saint Andrew’s regimental musical band. His unit took part in many regimental marches through the town.

The day of his next march was a beautiful sunny day. Drew slept in. He was due at the barracks at 10.00am and it was already a quarter to. He threw on his uniform without thinking and continued out the door.

He quickly joined his crew on their march and began blowing his tuba. Half way through the march he noticed everyone was looking at him in an unusual way. Then he realised his buttons were askew, his shirt, that was supposed to be white, was blue and on his feet he had only one shoe. ‘What an unusual uniform!’ laughed Drew and everyone had to agree.

12 comments:

jakedoodle said...

Once upon a time there was a school pupil called Scooby-Doo, he was also nickednamed Mule Man. He always dreamed of becoming a unicorn to improve the union and the nationwide company, which he called the Numpty Club. One day he went to school and asked his teacher Mr.Gray to SHAVE his rat.His rat was his moustache, which Scooby called the stylish rat. After school he fainted and ended up in casulty. The End. HOPE U ENJOYED MY STORY.

megan thornbury!!!!!!!!!!!!! said...

The strange packaging
One day there was a strange packaging left in the church beside the pew and the musical unit. The crew came marching in and they were in uniform, they said they will have to get bomb experts in and take it away. Soon after they came in they said "wait a minute" After a minute they said we will have to continue checking it out, "you will have to go out of the church because if it is a bomb you will all blow up". Two hours later they came out and said it was beautiful because it was a kitten and the bomb was a hoax. The end By megan thornbury!!!!!!!!!!

megan thornbury!!!!!!!!!!!!! said...

The strange packaging
One day there was a strange packaging left in the church beside the pew and the musical unit. The crew came marching in and they were in uniform, they said they will have to get bomb experts in and take it away. Soon after they came in they said "wait a minute" After a minute they said we will have to continue checking it out, "you will have to go out of the church because if it is a bomb you will all blow up". Two hours later they came out and said it was beautiful because it was a kitten and the bomb was a hoax. The end By megan thornbury!!!!!!!!!!

megan thornbury!!!!!!!!!!!!! said...

The strange packaging
One day there was a strange packaging left in the church beside the pew and the musical unit. The crew came marching in and they were in uniform, they said they will have to get bomb experts in and take it away. Soon after they came in they said "wait a minute" After a minute they said we will have to continue checking it out, "you will have to go out of the church because if it is a bomb you will all blow up". Two hours later they came out and said it was beautiful because it was a kitten and the bomb was a hoax. The end By megan thornbury!!!!!!!!!!

nAthan said...

HI AND THIS IS MY SCAFFOLD TEXT CALLED

THE STATUE CALLED STUDENT

THE DANCING STATUE WAS LIVING IN EUROPE WHEN HIS BROTHER, SCOOBY-DOO SHOUTED WITH HIS CREW IN ASIA,''COME OVER AND PLAY WITH MY CREW,THEIR PUPILS ARE BIG''HE SHOUTED STUPIDLY.THE DANCING STATUE MADE A POPULAR EXCUSE AND SAID''I'M TO TIRED TO GO''HE JOKED.'' I'M COMING OVER, SO NOW YOU WON'T CONTINUE '' HE SHOUTED ANGRILY.HE JUMPED BUT LANDED IN THE BEAUTIFUL SEA! IT MADE A MUSICAL SOUND. SPLASH!! HE FLOATED TO THE TOP AT MORNING DEW.HE BLAMED STUDENT,THEY ARGUED FOR HOURS.THEIR OLDER BROTHER CALLED VOLUME,HE THOUGHT UNUSUAL!!

THE END
HOPE YOU ENJOYED MY SCAFFOLD TEXT! FROM THE MAN!

james the super star said...

BACK TO THE FUTURE


Once there was a very smart student called Unicorn. He was very popular and people would call him Albert Einstien. His friends were from europe,they were called Scooby-Doo and Mule. Unicorn went to America one day and had an idea to go into the statue of Libraty. So he went into the mueseum and had a idea that he could make a machine that could send you back to the future. So Unicorn went home and thought about making the time machine.He got all the parts the next day to make the time machine. When he had all the parts he made a plan to make it, he put all the parts together and before you know it Unicorn had made the time machine. The next day he stood out on the streets with a beautiful sign saying do you want to try my time machine and Billie one of my friends went and tried it out at Unicorns house. It worked out okay and took him back to the 1116 and then after a while he got out and went to the statue of Liberty and told reception could Unicorns time machine go to the mueseum to show everybody and they said "yes you can." The next day Billie went to Unicorns house and took it to the mueseum and Unicorn in the end was a millionaire and was the smartest person in the world.





the end

holly said...

Drew's Unusual Uniform

One day a little boy named Drew went into his school in Europe as a pupil.
He was a regular boy but his unusual uniform wasn't... When he walked into his classroom, all of the other pupils looked at him stupidly. He was dressed a wee bit like Scooby Doo.
All of the pupils just stood like statues with there mouths wide open.
The volume was completely silent. All of the children were in such shock.
He slipped down in his seat quietly his face as red as a cherry tomato, how embarrassed was he?!
He went home after school that day in his unusual uniform and never went back to school again.


The End!

By Holly McCulloch.

Joel said...

Once there was a beautiful, magical, unicorn called Drew! Drew was popular because he had a special talent – he was able to predict the future of mules! One day he travelled to Europe to visit some of the unusual European Countries. He travelled to Liechtenstein to improve his knowledge of obtuse angles. He had an argument with a musical statue in Latvia over Scooby-Doo, and stupidly thought Scooby-Doo was a goldfish! On his return journey to Antarctica the crew of the ship, who weren’t wearing their regular uniform, accused Drew of snapping the pew! After disembarking the ship, he sped home in his car and was stopped by the police and was asked to turn down the volume of his radio! His excuse was “I wanted to have a disco in my car!”

Jack Dowey said...

MY SCAFOLD TEXT

Once there was a little boy called Drew, He was a pupil in unicorn comp.
Drew is the top student in Mr. Dew s class. Mr. Dew decided that they would go
to Europe this year for there school trip after there exams. He said if anyone was acting stupidly they will not be going. Two weeks after it was exam week Drew was in his in his full school uniform and ready to do his first exam. Drew was the smartest boy in his class and his target was to pass the exams and do his best.

Alexandra said...

Every student in the popular crew was beautiful. I stood like a statue thinking “What could I do to improve my uniform?” Stupidly, the next day I wore a Scooby-Doo costume to school. One popular pupil came up to me and said, “You look very unusual.” The only excuse I could think of was “I'm auditioning for the school musical.” In future I will continue to dress like a regular person!

Lauren22 said...

The European Student.....
Juliette, a European exchange student moved to a local school and studied musical arts. She was very beautiful and very popular.
The colour of the school uniform was blue and white.
One day Juliette went to her singing lesson and she was told to improve the volume of her voice.
Juliette became a regular at the local church, she become a member of the church choir. At the start of the church service as she walked up the aisle everyone went phew!!!, before she took her place in the pew.
The end.....

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