Our Scaffold Text this week uses the 'ee' sound
This can be made in many ways - ee, ey, y, ea, i, ie, ei and e.
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My neighbour has a silly surname. He is called Mr Rudolph Reindeer. Mr Reindeer has no patience and often complains about the silliest things – mum’s apron isn’t straight, there aren’t enough raisins in his birthday cake, the trailer’s wheels are on the pavement, the café doesn’t open late. When he gets angry he makes such strange faces and his veins pop out on his forehead.
Yesterday was Monday, the first day of the school holidays. It rained so hard that Mr Reindeer’s children could not go out to play. The children waited to see if the rain would stop and were dismayed to find they had to remain indoors. As they played they created mayhem. Mr Reindeer can’t wait until the holidays are over and peace reigns once again.
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My brother was very silly.My mum said things happing for a reason. My brothers was really weird.I got a new number and my brother took my phone and went on to my number and he pressed delete i nealy hit the ceiling. My brother started to call me creakily. my temper went decrease. My mum give me a piece of cake my temper was now decrease.A hippy came to my door and said PEACE DUDE ROCK ON
the end
My Donkey
My donkey is a very big donkey. It is almost up to the ceiling. I made an agreement with a dealer when my donkey was only a baby. I gave it a piece toffee and then it sneezed. If I want i can delete the contract that has my deal on it. I can increase and decrease how much i pay for food for my donkey. Early in the morning yesterday i had to go to the vets for my donkey. My donkey wouldn't eat and it was acting very weird so I took it to get some treatment. It had to stay at the vets for three nights. It was set a release date for Thursday.
THE END
Lee’s knees
Early one evening, an angry athlete, called Lee, came limping into the Accident and Emergency department of Emerald Hospital. Lee demanded to receive treatment because he had extreme pain in his knees. The nurse gave him three tablets to decrease the pain. She found an empty bed and told him to have complete rest until a doctor was free. Lee was thirsty and hungry but had agreed not to eat anything not even a piece of toast. The doctor released him from hospital later telling him there was no reason why complete rest would not take the pain away completely but if the pain increased to return immediately.
The end
By Philip McClelland.
The Cheeky Boy
My family had a boy. He was very cheeky and never behaved himself. He was angry because he didn't get a piece of toffee. We thought that that we should send him to a local nursery. He made friends with a weird boy who pulled all his teeth out for no reason. The nursery had a sports day. He came first and was rewarded with a designer hoodie. His mum was so pleased she rewarded him with 5 cookies from the best bakery in the city. Now he was delighted with himself, he thought he was the best.
rebecca w text is cool.
I've been told my family that when my uncle was my age he decided he was going be an athlete. For some weird,unknowen reason he got out from beneth his duvet early one morning told everyone that was what he was going to be. When his grandad asked him why, he replied "because I want to recive a gold medal." My grandad told him that it would be very demanding and he would have to be extremely fit and heathy would mean he would have to delete all the junk food and s weets from his diet. He would also have to complete hours and hours of training. After reciving all these pieces of
information from my grandad, my uncle decided maybe he wouldn't be an athlete afteer all. So he headed back upstairs and slid beneth his duvet again.
Some excellent paragraphs this week guys, well done.
I really like your passage about Lee's Knees Phillip - it reminds me of how I feel after a hockey match!
Try to comment on each others as well if you get a moment
House Point to each of you
One day while my mum was getting diesel she had an agreement with me that i could have sweets if i promised to be good for the rest of the day so i went into the shop looked around and saw a toffee bar on the shelf so i lifted it up and then i saw a packet of dretos and lifted them as well then i paid for them both and said please and thank you then i walked out of the shop and my mum asked me what i got and i said a toffee bar and a paket of dretos crisps and she said how much was it and i said £1.56p and my mum said thats cheap for a toffee bar and a pacet of dretos crisps THE END.
My early treatment
My early treatmentis when I recieve treatment for my nose because I sneeze regularly.If I recieve treatment for a week I get some toffee.I get angry when I dont get some toffee.When I am finished my early treatment my mum releases me from the room and for some weird reason I go to sleep.
Thanks for reading!
By Adam Crawford
a really good paragraph Sasha, but you didn't use any full stops. Please remember to use them next week ;)
also i should be I - you are important after all
I woke up early and i looked beneath my bed and there was a weird pair of slippers.I went down stairs and had a piece of pie for my breakfast.My sister came down stairs very angry and angrily said, "you ate the last piece of pie".We had an agreement that she could have all of my toffee.
y friend has three brothers .
I have to use book three .
I have three footy shirts .
I have three grannys and grandads .
Ihave three foot balls at my house .
Good to see you leaving a post Jason, it's a little short and simple but uses the ee sound well
very funny mr gray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rebecca w yours is COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like Lydias text!
Heres a riddle for ya
There once was a cowboy whho went into town on Friday he stayed for three days and left on Friday how did he do it!!!
If YOU ARE STUCK ON THE ANSWER ASK EITHER ANNA OR COURTNEY IN SCHOOL
if you do know wright back:-) ;)
hi!!:-) ;0 :) ;)
Anna and Courtney is the answer Friday is his horse:)
Yeahh it is WELL DONE LYDIA
:0 :) :-) :) ;0 :) ;0 :-0 ;-) ;) :0
I really like Philips and Kirstys scaffold text I think they are really good jus waiting for the x factor to come on it dosen't start for next half hour :( p.s Kylie Minogue is helpin Danni tonight on x factor its judges houses!!!:) ;0 :-)
i kiked lydia's
hi anna and courtney is the anser friday was the name of his horse
Yeahhh it is
WELL DONE
(p.s who is this)
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