Tuesday 14 September 2010

The Astounding House

You would never believe that thousands of people would travel over mountains, underground, through clouds and by sea to visit the magical fountain at Slough House.

At noon each day people would surround the fountain at the astounding house and watch as the house changed to a clown. Bounce, the clown would bow to the applause of the crowd and astound the audience with his magic tricks.

The audience would shout aloud, ‘What a clown!’. Bounce would count to ten, jump into the fountain and he would reappear in his nightgown.

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14 comments:

Nathan said...

HI AND THIS IS MY SCAFFOLD TEXT

THE COW CALLED TOWEL


TOWEL LIVED IN SLOUGH AND WAS AN ACCOUNTANT IN DOWNFALL MOUNTAIN THE CLOUD SHOP ,IT WAS THE TOWNS MOST POPULAR SHOP .IT'S MUSIC WAS LIKE IT WAS FROM LEONA LEWIS' MOUTH. HE WOULD FROWN WHEN ROUND THE COW WOULD COME IN ,THE SOUND OF HIS PROUD VOICE WOULD PARALIZE EVERYBODY IN THE ROOM.WHEN HE GOT HOME HE BOWS TO THE BOUGH OF HIS 1000000000 YEAR OLD TREE,HE PROWLS ROUND IT TO CHECK IF THERE IS ANY MARKS.HE SHOUTED OUT LOUD ''I LOVE MY 1000000000 YEAR OLD TREE''.HE GOES INSIDE AND PUTS ON HIS SURROUND SOUND AND WATCHES THE VOWEL SHOW.IT GOES ON FOR 3 COW HOURS.WHEN HE GOES TO BED HE FINDS A 100 THOUSAND DISCOUNT VOUCHER!!HE GETS OUT OF BED AND GETS HIS BIKE, HE RIDES 7 COW MILES TO THE SHOP AND READS THE SIGN:TOWEL IS SACKED FOR GOING HOME 3 COW HOURS EARLY!!
THE END
HOPE YOU ENJOYED MY SCAFFOLD TEXT, FROM THE SCAFFOLD TEXT MAN,NATHAN

Megan Thornbury said...

The amaing Mr moo!!!!
There was a really cool cow called Mr moo who would prowl around the town.He would astound the shoppers who began to surround him because this cow could shout aloud and you could make out every vowel of every word Mr Moo spoke. People used to frown because as soon as he opened his mouth there was a downfall of drool that anyone close by would need a towel to dry themselves. Mr Moo had performed about a thousand times but each account was different because he was allowed to say want he wanted after all you wouldn't mess with a speaking cow or tell him off the amazing Mr Moo.

THOMAS said...

THE COW IN TOWN

Once there was a proud cow on a mountain. She got bored and decided to go to town and so she did. In the town it was very strange for the proud cow. Then there was aloud sound and it made the cow jump. She went to see what it was and soon she saw an army, there were about a thousand men. They were marching round the town. The cow wondered what they were doing. She didn’t like it so she decided to go back home and surround herself with a large amount of food. The cow decided not to go to town again.

Jake said...

Once upon a time there was a professional PS3 player called Cow. His favourite game was Plough Downfall. Cow loved to shout at the Doubtful Mountain Numty Gang, who were in the game, however they liked to spin around a lot. In the game he drove around town shouting DIE! During one of his games he heard a plop sound, the roof of his car was leaking. He had to get it fixed or he couldn't play the game, so he drove his car to the repair man. The repair man charged Cow $4000. Cow was devastated and cried all night. Hope you enjoyed my story.
The End.

emma mcclatchey said...

hi this is emma from p6sm i went on your class blog i think it is nice and cool.

lauren22 said...

Hi this is lauren here and this is my scaffold text

There once was an accountant called Mr Brown he was very proud of his work,but one day he had a big frown on his face,he had counted the bank money incorrect.Mr Brown had a round face but he had a mountain of tears.He started to shout,with a loud sound why me,why why me?He wasn't very proud anymore,he was sad and ashamed.The next day Mr Brown went to work very sad,when he got there he was allowed to recount the bank money.Mr Brown thought very hard,then eventually agreed to and he counted it correctly.He became very proud again and he made an agreement that he would never be so foolish again!

lauren22 said...

your blog is cool!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

John woke up one morning and went to climb a mountain.
He went outside and shouted at George the cow who was prowling round the field. He allowed George to come with him. The clouds were grey as they set off. They climbed for a long time. There was no sound from the town below. John frowned as it started to rain. A thousand raindrops pelted them as they ran home.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joel said...

Once there was a doubtful accountant. He liked to prowl around his office. One day he began to count his money aloud when he had finished he ended up with one thousand pounds. He looked out the window of his office and noticed a big dark cloud overhead. He frowned and decided to leave work early to go home and plough his fields. When he was on his way home there were road works in the town so he had to go over a mountain. When he arrived home he had received a letter from Slough hockey club. They had asked him if he wanted to play for them. He was very proud and pleased to have been asked and shouted aloud to his wife the good news. He replied back to them ‘Yes I would certainly like to play for your hockey team, when do I start?

Alexandra said...

My grandad lived on a farm which had some cows. It was near the town of Lurgan. You could hear the sound of them mooing every morning. There were times when he had to shout at them. When he went to milk them they would surround him. He also had some other fields which he had to plough. My granny used to frown when my grandad came in with mucky boots. Grandad used to sing 'she'll be coming round the mountains when she comes'. Granny was doubtful if he was still in his right mind so she hired an accountant to see how many thousands he had!

Christina said...

John woke up one morning and went to climb a mountain.
He went outside and shouted at George the cow who was prowling round the field. He allowed George to come with him. The clouds were grey as they set off. They climbed for a long time. There was no sound from the town below. John frowned as it started to rain. A thousand raindrops pelted them as they ran home.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jake Doodle said...

Once upon a time there was a boy called Blur.A magic man had put a curse on Blur. Blur had a pet giraffe called Refrigerator. His pet drunk millimetres and millilitres of magners beer so he got drunk and died. So that was the end of his refrigerator.