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Get out of bed,’ I heard her bleat. ‘You’re not much of an athlete!’
‘Oh mum, the exercise is really extreme, it makes me want to shout and scream.’
‘Get into the field and give my head peace. Stop acting like your little niece.’
At this point I did concede and wandered to the mucky field.
The abundance of energy I did release made my oxygen levels decrease. Thirsty work and rigorous routine made me into a mean machine.
With my extreme training now complete I realise I’ll make the greatest athlete.
My mother will cease her heat at last, and all her bleating will be a thing of the past!
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THE WEIRD DONKEY
Once there was a weird donkey. The reason the donkey was weird was because it ate toffee and when it got thirsty it drank coffee. But one day it woke up early and released a big yawn then it went for a walk in the empty field. Suddenly it saw an athlete and ran away but the athlete caught it and gave it an exercise treatment. Soon it went back home to get some peace and quiet.
THE EXTREME ATHLETE.
Early one morning,I was wakened by a weird noise.I got up from beneath my duvet and discovered the reason for this complete nonsense.Outside my window there was an extreme sport going on.This athlete in training was trying to jump up and touch my ceiling.He was on the decking and creakily moving around. He would increase and decrease his speed of running and jumping. I couldn't get peace to sleep so I decieded to reward this guy who looked rather warm and thirsty ,with a drink and I gave him some toffee for energy. The treatment I was to receive for doing this good turn was a piece of the action.He jumped over the top of me and ran away-what a guy.!!!!.
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The troubled athlete
Once there was an athlete and he won many rewards for marathons, cross countries, bungie jumps and races. Once he was running a marathon and very weirdly he started to sneeze and sneeze and sneeze. You see it was very weird because he had never ever sneezed in his whole life! So he kept on running thinking they would go away but they didn't. So he stopped for a minute and looked around then he realised he was sneezing because there was a donkey lying in the shade. You see the athlete was allergic to all furry animals so he took a break and then realised he had won the prize and the prize was the donkey but he got some extreme treatment and some toffee instead.
The End!
The weirdo numpty boy
A long time from now there is an extremely crazy angry weirdo numpty boy, who did nothing but sat on his lazy butt all day playing his Nintendo wii. He only got up to go to the toilet or to change his game. One day while he was playing new super bros wii there was thunder storm and all the electric went off just when Jimmy was just about to complete his 1000th game!!!!!!!
HI AND THIS IS MY SCAFFOLD TEXT CALLED
THE WEIRD DONKEY
THE WEIRD DONKEY LIVES IN A PIECE OF CAKE ON A BIG HILL MADE OF DESIGNER CLOTHES.HE ALSO LIVES IN SWEET CITY, IN THE COUNTY OF EXTEME SNEEZE.ONE MORNING HE WOKE UP ANGRY BECAUSE HE WAS UP VERY EARLY IN THE MORNING BECAUSE OF HIS EXTREME TREATMENT THE NIGHT BEFORE.HIS JOB WAS TO BE AN ATHLETE THOUGH HE ATE TOFFEE ALL THE TIME AND EVERY DAY HE WOULD INCREASE THE AMOUNT OF IT HE ATE.ONE DAY HE HEARD A PLOP SOUND,IT WAS HIS BELLY LEAKING!!HE WENT TO THE HOSPITAL ANGRILY TO GET SEWED TOGETHER WITH DIESEL.WHEN THE OPERATION WAS COMPLETE HE GOT A REWARD AND WOULD DECREASE THE TOFFEE TO ONLY EATING GREENS.
THE END
HOPE YOU ENJOYED MY SCAFFOLD TEXT AND HOPE YOU LEARNED YOUR LESSON ABOUT FOOD [I DID'NT THOUGH HAHA!!]
FROM THE SCAFFOLD TEXT MAN
The Athlete!!!
The athlete was thirsty. He demanded that he would have a glass of water and a piece of cake. When he walked out of the café he received a letter. It said you need to complete the Olympics.
For some reason this made him feel weird. He went to practice his running at an empty track. He was extremely angry when some boys told him he ran like a donkey. He increased his speed and was rewarded when he heard them clapping.
THE END!!!
Once upon a time there was a numty donkey called Sneeze. Sneeze was a really angry donkey who made an agreement with a toffee called Toffee. Toffee was a stupid person, or as i would like to call him a angry monster. He was a designer of a diesel company called You've Been Dieseled. It was an empty company, not just 1 numty worked there, but 5 numtys worked there. Toffee was shocked with numtyness.
Laurens scaffold text
'Harry the winner'
One day there was an athlete called Harry, he was such a kind person but he was also a bit big headed.
Harry would get up early every morning to train. He would start slowly and then increase his speed, and before he finished training he would decrease his speed again. He was really thirsty when he finished training.
The reason Harry trained so much was there was a big race coming up and the reward was really good.
One day whilst training his knee started to seize, he went to the doctor to receive treatment for it. He did not complete his treatment until the Friday. Harry became very angry because the big race was the next day.
The doctor came to an agreement with Harry to do the short race instead of the big race, in case he damaged his knee beneath the surface.
It fely really weird for Harry doing the short race, but he was very happy because he won the race!!
One day a mother of nine thought she would need treatment because of the demands from her children. She was extremely tired of having no peace. One cried angrily ' I'm thirsty, ' another stomped so hard he nearly went through the ceiling. She said she would reward them if they behaved by giving them an increase in their pocket money. However, if they continued to be weird they would get a decrease in their pocket money. So they made an agreement to try and be on their best behaviour.
HI IM JACK AND HERES MY SCAFOLD TEXT
Once there was an athlete called Mr Extreme who always pushed himself to the limit and that’s how he got his nickname. Early one morning he decided to really increase his pace for his marathon training so he could decrease his finishing time as he started off he felt a weird sensation in his leg he tried to do his best to keep his pace but his leg gave way and he fell over. He ended up in hospital and had to receive treatment for his injured leg.
Once there was an angry numpty called Toffee. Toffee likes to drink diesel. He has a donkey called Sneeze who is an Olympic athlete. The day of the Olympics Toffee brought Sneeze to the stadium. It was empty so Toffee started to shout angrily and as soon as Toffee stopped shouting everyone appeared from beneath the seats. When he got home he was very thirsty so he had a drink of diesel and a piece of carrot cake. The next day he went to New Look to buy some designer clothing and on his way home he won a reward for being the first ever man to buy something in New Look!
HE PLAYED his exxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxboxxxxxxxxxxxxxx all day his eyes went squre and as small as a pin head.Also HE HAD TO PUT 60 FACTOR SUN CREME ON HIS EYES he played extreme on guitar hero 4 he played it that much that he got a reward aqnd got a holiday for free in peace yeah peace manbut when he had a son and wife he got angry because the son snaped his guitar hero game in half when he just completed the game and deleted all his stuff so he killed his son
I LOVE ITWHEN HE KILLS HIS SON GOODNIGHT NOW GO AWAY
how is go go ga ga & granny ga ga???????!!!!!!!!!!!
like the web.
ONE DAY THERE WAS A BIRTHDAY PARTY AND EVERYONE WAS INVITED IT WAS A LITTLE GIRLS BIRTHDAY. AS EVERYONE STARTED TO ARRIVE IT STARTED TO RAIN EVERYONE STARTED TO COMPLAIN. THEY ALL WENT INSIDE AND STARTED OFF PLAYING SOME GAMES, EVERYONE HAD TO OBEY ORDERS OR ELSE THEY WERE NOT ALLOWED TO PLAY. THEY WERE TOLD TO STAND IN A STRAIGHT LINE, WHEN THEY WERE ALL STRAIGHTENED UP THE LITTLE GIRLS MUM SAID THEY ALL HAD TO COME AND GET A PIECE OF CAKE, SO THEY ALL GATHERED AROUND AND SANG THE BIRTHDAY SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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