Wednesday 6 October 2010

My Neighbour Mr Reindeer

My neighbour has a silly surname. He is called Mr Rudolph Reindeer. Mr Reindeer has no patience and often complains about the silliest things – mum’s apron isn’t straight, there aren’t enough raisins in his birthday cake, the trailer’s wheels are on the pavement, the cafĂ© doesn’t open late. When he gets angry he makes such strange faces and his veins pop out on his forehead.

Yesterday was Monday, the first day of the school holidays. It rained so hard that Mr Reindeer’s children could not go out to play. The children waited to see if the rain would stop and were dismayed to find they had to remain indoors. As they played they created mayhem. Mr Reindeer can’t wait until the holidays are over and peace reigns once again.

9 comments:

Megan Thornbury said...

The Cake That Turns To Crumbs.
Once there was a competition with a baker in it called Bob. Bob made a birthday cake because it was part of the competition,so he put a raisin and a few more into the cake and mixed it. Once it was baked he put it on display to show how good it was. He did not realize that it was going to get stale. His customer said "you need to take it out of display". He took it out of display and waited for the time to come. The time came and he was carrying it to the place to see if he could win the competition.But he dropped it and it got all dirty and broke into tiny pieces. He was a really silly man. He ended up with most of the cake in his apron. Megan Thornbury.

jakedoodle said...

Once upon a time there was a sleigh called cake. Cake was a very happy sleigh who liked to play with clay. One day it was Cakes birthday so he decided to do some creations. He went to the shop to buy some lego blocks for his creation and he had to give in a payment of one penny for one hundred blocks of lego. Cake exclaimed it was his birthday so he got one thousand blocks for free. He went home very happy and made lots of lego creations. Hope u enjoyed my story.

bonehead ryan said...

Mr Reindeer

This is the story of one reindeer that had always eaten too much cake, the reindeer’s first name is peter & his surname is kay. One day peter kay was taking his usual lunch (cake) and immediately he had a heart attack and fell down onto a pavement and someone called the ambulance but it was delayed. When the ambulance finely got there peter kay was dead so they did not get to operate.

NATHAN said...

HI AND THIS IS MY SCAFFOLD TEXT CALLED

THE SAFETY RAISIN
THE SAFETY RAISIN WORKS AS A WARDEN AND EVERY DAY HE WOULD COMPLAIN ABOUT ALL THE LITTER ON THE PAVEMENT.ONE DAY HE WOKE UP AND REMEMBERED THAT HE HAD TO STRAIGHTEN HIS HAIR FOR HIS NEIGHBOUR'S WEDDING BUT THE WEDDING WAS STARTING IN 3 MINUTES. HIS VEIN WAS NEARLY POPPING SO HE CALLED FOR SUPER RAISIN. IT WAS SUPER RAISIN'S BIRTHDAY SO HE WAS EATING HIS CAKE. HE GOT SAFETY RAISIN IN HIS SUIT IN 1 SECOND AND FLEW TO THE WEDDING JUST IN TIME FOR THE BRIDE COMING IN ON A TRAILER IN AN APRON AND SUPER RAISIN WAS THERE AS BOB GECKO!!

HOPE YOU ENJOYED MY SCAFFOLD TEXT FROM THE MAN

christina said...

Once upon a time there was a boy called John. “It’s my birthday” he exclaimed. His mum straightened her apron and started to bake his birthday cake. She was displaying her creation when their neighbour came in. She complained that she wouldn’t be at John’s party. It started to rain. This ment they couldn’t operate the bouncy castle on the pavement outside. The delay was for their own safety. Soon the sun came out and they bounced and bounced.
THE END!!!

HOLLY said...

Holly's Scaffold Text!

My neighbour Mr Reindeer

ENJOY

Everyone doesnt like Mr Reindeer because he has a strange surname Rudolph Reindeer.So one day he was walking past and everyone was laughing at him because of his silly surname so he decided to change it to Mr Knobs. So the next day he walked happily across the streets and everyone was laughing but then very bravely he stood up and made an announchment. Excuse me i would like to say could you stop laughing at me becayse i have now changed my name to Mr Knobs. But just then some boy made a sob and shouted ha ha thats even worse now ypur a hobknob everyone started to laugh and he felt upset and ran home. After a little while he recovered and went back into town and said I am no longer Mr Reindeer or Mr Knobs I am now truely and foreverly Mr Percy wither you like it or not so then everyone loved him and every one was now his best friend.


Hope you enjoyed
my scaffold text!

THE ENDO!!!

Joel said...

Once there was a clay man called Raisin who lived in a trailer. The King who had reigned at the time had said that all the clay men had to work for him. Raisin’s neighbour was also a clay man. They were both sad so they decided that they would hide in Raisin’s attic. The next day was Raisin’s birthday, so he put on his apron to make a chocolate cake to bring up to his attic for them both to eat. His neighbour had great praise for the cake and exclaimed, “What a fantastic creation!”

Alexandra said...

One day a little girl, Alexandra, whose surname was Carson had a birthday party with lots of cake. She received a display of lovely presents such as hair straighteners, a sleigh and a gold chain. She tried to slide her sleigh on the pavement but her mum exclaimed, 'You need some snow for the sleigh to operate!' She told her she would also need a safety helmet to wear. Alexandra complained that she had to delay using her sleigh and could not enjoy it immediately.

Lucy said...

Hello Mr Gray. Lovin' the new blog. There is lots of things to do. By the way love the story!